@drakettsuui: The left is a college entrance examination composition written by a high school student, and the right is a subject test composition by a Taiwanese student. The left is considered a full-mark composition by a group of netizens, and the right is published as a high-scoring composition by the Taiwan College Entrance Examination Center.
Counting the historical context, you can see that the tide of the times is mixed with sand and mud, and no one can be safe in a self-enclosed island. In this torrent, in the magnificent waves of the side currents, only those who are well versed in “each beauty is beautiful, the beauty of others, the beauty of beauty and sharing, the world is the same” can stand firm, stand on the present, and look forward to the sparks.
A drop of water into the sea avoids drying up, and win-win cooperation shakes the past and the present.
Just as the “Youlan Cao” says, “Cooperation is like orchids, and its fragrance is Yang. Pick and wear it, and win-win in all directions.” In the long river of time, I still remember Lin Xiangru’s shocking words, “Now the two tigers are fighting, their momentum is not born together… to the urgency of the country first and then private hatred”, which led to the beautiful talk of “General and Prime Minister He”; I still remember Zhuge Liang’s efforts to overcome all opinions, and his debate with the scholars to promote the Sun-Liu alliance, which eventually led to the Battle of Chibi, which has been passed down through the ages. People of all ages who have aspirations and integrity are good at borrowing the power of cooperation to achieve a win-win situation for several parties. On the other hand, those who want to develop by blowing out the lights of others and blocking the way of others, seem to occupy temporary interests, but in fact, they are not clear about people, and will eventually be spurned and forgotten by the world.
The collective cooperation and mutual benefit for the country is like the layers of fine soil for Mount Tai, which cannot be released or rejected.
Nowadays, the wind of ninety thousand miles is rising, and China is showing the vivid charm of China’s “intelligent manufacturing” with a brand new attitude, but this is by no means easy, and it cannot be achieved by beating drums and gongs, nor can it be realized by one person alone, one boat alone. From being ridiculed by foreigners as impossible to independently develop a nuclear submarine, to today’s “reaching for the moon in the sky and catching turtles in the ocean”, countless scientific research organizations have gathered small streams into rivers and seas, and accumulated fine sand to form mountains, which has finally exchanged for the current fire – you can look up and see, “Tianwen” explores fire, “Xihe” chases the sun, “Chang’e” visits the osmanthus; you can bury your head and see, “Jiaolong” travels, “Haiyan” dives, and thousands of miles are clear; you can also send your eyes to look, the red flag is fluttering, the spring breeze is proud, and the mountains and rivers are showing pictures.
A hundred flowers bloom to show the spring; thousands of sails compete to show the magnificent waves; the beauty of beauty and sharing shows the style of a great power.
In today’s China, where development is changing with each passing day, the world is moving towards multi-polarization, and economic globalization is steadily advancing, openness has become the only way for the country to prosper and stabilize. However, unilateralism and hegemonism are surging in the Western world. Under a series of challenges such as “the death of soybeans” and “Sino-US friction”, China is committed to promoting world cooperation and win-win with an open and inclusive attitude, from the “Belt and Road” to promoting the construction of a community with a shared future for mankind. China is building a confident, calm, and equal-sighted foundation with the spirit of cooperation and win-win, and the ambition to shake the world. All of this demonstrates the vivid charm of cooperation and win-win and the wisdom of a great power.
Youth is the early spring of the budding of a hundred flowers, the sharp blade newly issued from the grindstone, and the master of the world.
Nowadays, the test questions of the times have been listed, and our answer sheets are being written. We need to keep the heart of cooperation, seek the benefit of win-win, and in the great practice of realizing the Chinese dream, we will use the power of cooperation to release our youthful ideals, and in the glorious course of realizing the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, we will use the benefit of win-win to write the chapter of life, sail on a boat of cooperation, and cross the jade fields of win-win!
@Headline News: Weibo @Headline News held the first full-mark composition in the college entrance examination composition contest! @YuHappiest The composition “Sailing on a Boat of Cooperation, Crossing the Jade Fields of Win-Win” by a high school student won the full marks of the judges! And the praise of the judges and netizens. @Lao Huang teaches Chinese: The opening is to the point and hits the theme; the writing is magnificent and inspiring; @Peking University Yunlong teacher’s evaluation: It is rare to see such a beautiful article, the word I use is beauty, the fluency and writing are all in one category; @Yilin Magazine’s evaluation: The theme is clear, the examples are appropriate, the language is concise, the logic is progressive, and the discussion fits the current situation; @Wang Chenyi’s evaluation: The whole article has a fair and objective theme, the beginning and the end echo each other, the structure is natural, the writing is natural and smooth, and the title plays a finishing touch. Good excellent composition, come and see!
The heat makes the distant view outside the windshield fluctuate like a wave. For me, who had just started elementary school, “the outside is rolling and rolling”, is a premonition of “very hot, very hot, so hot that I can’t stand it” – before rolling down the car window, my family’s car contributed the dryness and depression of the midsummer in the car lane on Jian Guo South Road, and this later encounter became the taste that I will always remember in a certain gap of living. I leaned against the back door glass with my hair messy, and I was about to have my first summer vacation in my life. I was probably thinking about such a big thing at that time.
I didn’t pay attention to the asymmetrical color of the sleeves, nor did I pay attention to the hat that was weak and could not be burned in the cement jungle. Her burgundy rain boots stepped and wandered between various four-wheeled animals, like rubber competing with the hot asphalt; the scene was shaking and dry due to the heat rising.
At that moment, the car window went down, and the heat was pressing. I looked up suspiciously at the strange transaction taking place in the front seat of the car. I didn’t know what my father in the driver’s seat had exchanged for after listening to the words of the girl in the co-pilot’s seat? I only remember that it smelled like a burst of fragrance, like flowers, but how could there be flowers with iron wires as stems? The strong but conflictingly elegant white flakes were hung on the rearview mirror. I seemed to have thought of the blinds at that time. I watched from the back seat the woman in the co-pilot’s seat and the same white skin and strange light blue eyes as the flakes reflected in the rearview mirror and looked at me. If there were really blinds at that time, I would pull them up and close them tightly. Only after I understood things did I realize that the woman was codenamed Magnolia by me, and she smelled very light and soft, which was fascinating.
How would I know that the association of blinds came from the American language cram school I was sent to after school? Was the foreign woman codenamed Magnolia also from that co-pilot’s seat that climbed into my father’s car? Magnolia is disgusting and makes me carsick for the whole journey, and I don’t want to remember anything anymore. But Magnolia haunted my childhood in a bewitching way. I really hope there were blinds to stop me from witnessing, or simply make me lose the sense of smell connection with this Magnolia.
The counter of the American language cram school had a bunch of blackened magnolias in a glass plate when my mother picked me up for the last time. That color reminded me of my mother’s face, the face of the magnolia seller, and a dark childhood memory.
I was so hot that I couldn’t stand it, the magnolia flower of the affair, the love that was strung together, the disgusting floral fragrance, the woman, the mother, and my first summer vacation of life, when I began to hate the magnolia flower.
@Island Literature: In Taiwan, after the annual university entrance subject ability test (subject test), the College Entrance Examination Center will always select a few high-scoring compositions as model essays and publish them on the Internet for people to refer to. This year’s subject test in Taiwan is “The Memory of the Smell of Flowers and Trees”, and one article is particularly eye-catching. The article focuses on the smell of magnolia, and writes about the experience of witnessing the affair of the father in childhood. After being shared on the Internet, it has aroused heated discussion among netizens.
The following are comments from Weibo netizens edited by China Digital Times:
Lootie Xiao Ayi’s avatar: A pile of meaningless rhetoric stacked together to form nonsense.
Pipi Curtain Doll: It seems magnificent, but in fact, the content is empty. The college entrance examination composition is so full marks, which will eventually mislead candidates. This kind of composition is very similar to the articles in the system.
Feminist Man: The left is indeed like AI writing, and we are the earliest AI material library.
Tiang laughs at you like a dog: Whoever dares to write like the right side here will get zero points.
Sakura Garden: I am shocked that some people are saying that the style of writing is different, and argumentative essays are more demanding on logical thinking and language ability. The problem is, what logical thinking does the left article reflect? The logic of paste style? As for language ability, the left article is difficult to read and difficult to hear in almost every word and sentence, such as “beauty and sharing” – it makes me sick from the tone.
Tokyo Bay Corpse: I’m laughing to death, anyway, the college entrance examination composition is now a formula, just put it all on patriotism.
The year of the fight is beaten: How to tell a good Chinese story if it is written like the right side.
Ordinary Netizen 2023: The left side wins.
Reborn I am Old Zhong’s address book: Artificial intelligence and humans.
I don’t know the paper: The eight-part writing is wonderful.
Eat less: Two mental states, very typical.
Little Pink Dog Wang Dahong: I feel that the right side is not as atmospheric as our left side…
A can of invisibility spray: What is the party application written on the left.
Feng Yiting Baochai plays Diaochan: Anyway, you have to take the civil service examination when you graduate, so you can write the application in advance and save four years of detours.
infernitybeacon: This one on the left looks like a set of works, in other words, you can basically write it like this no matter what the topic is. The so-called paragraphs memorized from the full-mark composition.
thinkthou: The full-mark composition on the left really made me sick, and it was full of the taste of “winning”.
sam66101686: The left is the kind of abuse of idioms and allusions, and the attitude of looking at the world from the perspective of God, which makes people feel disgusted. The right is the real plain life, more down-to-earth.
sytxgg: One is for scores and the other is to show writing skills, both are correct, the mistake is education.
juirian2: Regardless of these two compositions, the Taiwanese composition topic can actually write prose? This is basically unimaginable in China.
Rahula221: The left is just a pile of words, and the right at least tells a story.
huangfandong: The full-mark composition of the wall country suddenly evoked the memories of high school, the juxtaposition of rhetoric, the citation of ancient texts, the combination of current affairs, the staggered paragraphs of length, the persecution delusion of the great powers are bullying me, the mentality of the weak who want to become bigger and stronger, as if everything is said and nothing is said, it turns out that after more than ten years, it is still the same familiar formula.
80bc6c6c: I can’t read the left side, the right side is okay.
