Yesterday was the seventh day after the passing of the 11 teachers and students in Qiqihar.
Yesterday afternoon, the official account of Qiqihar No. 34 Middle School published an article mourning the teachers and students who died in the collapse of the school gymnasium roof.
After reading this eulogy, I feel disgusted.
The full text of the eulogy has 89 characters, but their names together have 32 characters.
Yes, their names did not appear in the eulogy that mourned them.
We can only see their self-righteous literary embellishment, only see gorgeous rhetoric, exquisite parallelism, and beautiful imagery.
“Pain crushes the Milky Way, turning into stars, turning into the bright moon, turning into your appearance.”
“We are extremely sad and send our condolences with tears!
We deeply mourn and cherish the memory!”
Such sentences are like a full-score composition in the college entrance examination Chinese language exam, empty, superficial, affected, and exaggerated.
Pain is “Every second I live is painful”, is “Mommy was wrong, I hurt you, come home with Mommy”, is “Who will take care of me in the future?”, is “All my best friends are gone”.
It cannot crush the Milky Way, it can only crush the hearts of the parents.
It cannot turn into stars and the bright moon, it can only make the relatives who have lost them, in the remaining years of this life, when they think of them, their hearts will be broken and they will be in deep pain.
Showing off writing skills should not be at this time.
Such writing is intransitive, it only points to the rhetoric itself, and does not refer to any reality.
It lightly turns the heavy sorrow that words cannot bear into stars and the bright moon, that is, turning the reality of sorrow into a vague romance, thus avoiding any possibility of questioning the man-made disaster.
Therefore, the empathy, apology, reflection, and accountability that should have been there, not a single word dares to say, all disappeared.
Only the perfunctory, whitewashing, and evading the important and dwelling on the trivial of non-mainstream grief literature are left.
Netizens scolded well: “Crush your nm’s Milky Way, can’t even write the eulogy well, is it really difficult to sincerely express regret? What are you showing off your writing skills for?”
I also saw a netizen say: “They are really good at it, three exclamation marks in the title, and the copy is copied from Baidu. They are really something”.
I searched and then the thing that shattered my three views appeared, this sentence “Pain crushes the Milky Way, turning into stars, turning into the bright moon, turning into your appearance”, TM is actually plagiarism!
This sentence was originally used by a 96-year-old girl on Zhihu to mourn her fetus that was aborted due to a渣男’s irresponsibility, but it was plagiarized by Qiqihar No. 34 Middle School and used to mourn the 11 teachers and students who had just passed away.
This sentence comes from the post of this mother on May 21, 2023, maybe it is resentment towards the渣男, maybe it is just losing her child, this mother wrote it extremely long, it is really thoughtful that the staff of Qiqihar No. 34 Middle School could pick out this sentence from the long篇累牍.
God crushed the Milky Way, turning into stars, turning into the bright moon, and the rest, turning into his appearance. (Original sentence)
Pain crushes the Milky Way, turning into stars, turning into the bright moon, turning into your appearance. (Qiqihar No. 34 Middle School eulogy)
Can these two almost identical sentences really be explained by coincidence?
TMD, even the eulogy is second-hand, what do you expect them to do?
Writing this, I feel chest tightness, anger, and powerlessness!!!
Damn!
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